Which one should I buy?????????????????
Aug 07, 2008 by Agent Of Chaos | Posted in Fashion & Accessories
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The first one because
a.it's more basic
b.cuter
c.a way better picture
d.it won't seem as obssesive as the other one
babybobo789 | Aug 07, 2008
the 1st one - it will match with more stuff
PeAcE_lOvE_gAp <3 | Aug 07, 2008
yeah, the first.
LJ | Aug 07, 2008
Definitely the first one! =)
got_mask2 | Aug 07, 2008
the first one.
I miss him too
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iwicmmotlnjj;; | Aug 07, 2008
I like the first one it will go better with more stuff.
Sarah | Aug 07, 2008
what are some fun activities?
Apr 01, 2008 by its complicated | Posted in Fashion & Accessories
what are some fun activities college students would be interested in doing? we are already doing things like hippyfest(tie dying t shirts, and making hemp necklaces) and things like mud volleyball, free massages(during finals week) botchee ball, and like 193809238423 other things. im looking for anything else like group activities they can do.
Well, I know that collage students like orgies but on he family friendly side of things you can have some sort of bowling night at you local bowling ally.
guyperson78 | Apr 01, 2008
Dunnoooo
Fxcked Up | Apr 01, 2008
bean bags, guitar hero tourneys, rock band, lots of fun things!
bballbabi1991 | Apr 01, 2008
Writers please rate my story it's chapter one. I promise youll love it. If you do please star it?
Dec 01, 2007 by BlueLucario | Posted in Books & Authors
WHAT ARE YOUR OPINIONS ON THIS STORY? WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT IT WHAT DON'T YOU LIKE ABOUT IT. IF YOU WANT TO READ THE WHOLE THING PLEASE POST YOUR EMAIL.
PLEASE TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE ON MY STORY.
You have a very interesting beginning for the story and the potential for it to go quite well. I like the description of what the main character sees, etc.
Areas to work on:
Try to avoid using repeated pronouns as the subject so often. This is difficult when you write a story in first person like you have, but still, it gets annoying to the reader to repeat words. Try rewording the sentence to avoid beginning it with "I" or "she" always.
Your sentences get choppy at times. By that I mean short followed by another 2 or 3 shorts. Use more sentence variety. Maybe one would be a longer sentence where you would use connecting words like "therefore", "however", "as well as" etc. and then the following sentence would be shorter for making a quick point and emphasis.
Make sure your first sentence hooks the reader to want to read the 2nd and so forth throughout the first few paragraphs. Once they're hooked, it's a lot easier usually. When I write [which I do constantly] I usually spend more than half the time of the first chapter solely on the first paragraph.
Last item, your speech is not quite natural. Spell out the conversations as you would say them, and then write them down with a little less perfect grammar if necessary or whatever reflection you wish to use of the speaker's accent or dialect.
Overall, I applaud you for beginning an overall excellent job. I enjoyed reading the story and look forward to continuing to watch its progress. With only a little editting here and there, I see wonderful potential for it. GREAT JOB!
PS Don't look at it as a bad thing for editing. I've written many works now and always I have to go back and edit/change/alter/re-word and sometimes even completely re-do an entire section before it becomes perfect. It's all part of the process. You really are doing a great job!
stevedepasto | Dec 01, 2007
OMGSH How old are you because that story was AWSOME!!
I think you should put some more UMPH into it though i think that it could also use some more detail in this chapter also it would be great if you made the chapter a bit longer I mean how many pages would that fill up if your were to publish the book 4 pages i like chapters to be long but that may just be me Be sure to email me @ niyaqueen123@yahoo.com if your bookk gets published cuz i would defiently read it.
Good luck and happy reading
niyaqueen123 | Dec 01, 2007
Very good story. Watch your tenses as in the paragraph that starts "it's been approximately" Also I would change approximately to about as it fits the child's age and voice better. Only one other thing. Change "anyone who is seen this child" to "anyone who has seen this child"
I would like to read the rest f the story but you should not ask for an email from people you don't know. It is not safe. Why don't you consider posting it on a site like www.helium.com. It is a site where anyone can post their writing.
I hope to see it in a book someday! You have a very talented way of writing!
rogerws76 | Dec 01, 2007
u dont need to, its great, just please, please, PLEASE write more and post it as a quetion on YAHOO! Answers
PLEASE! 5 stars out of 5 or 10 out of 10!!!!!
just watch your tenses, though.
Harry Potter fan! | Dec 01, 2007
i love it,
i think something more should happen in the bigining
10/10!!!
Lola | Dec 01, 2007
hey that story is awesome! it wasn't what i was expecting at all but i liked it. your punctuation could use a little work but otherwise it was WAY good!
Madison K | Dec 01, 2007
It's awesome. I like it because it was very descriptive and clear. I could see a movie playing in my mind. I like it! (Great job!)
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Shauna | Dec 01, 2007
Well spoken. It does seem though at times it gets to the corny point. I am a very particular person about this type of thing but you must make sure you don't make it SUPER corny.
Content wise I would either bump the age up or down because that age is too commonly found. I just found it moderately corny at times. A 12 year old girl who has amnesia just sounds familiar.
Technically it could use some work. Be VERY careful about switching from the past to present tense, some punctuation could be fixed, and other small grammatical related things
Overall it was wonderful. If you have more I would love for you to send me and e-mail at
tahoeice_52@yahoo.com
Well done. It is aimed in a good direction
thankyouverymuch | Dec 02, 2007
Writer's please rate my story, please note it's very long. So if you dont have time to read please star.
Nov 23, 2007 by BlueLucario | Posted in Books & Authors
PLEASE DON'T JUST SAY YOU LIKE IT, PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT IT AND HOW YOU THINK I SHOULD IMPROVE. iF YOU ALL LIKE IT PLEASE STAR IT.
I thought that it was interesting...good luck! Myself, I am interested in writing Children's books. Everyone loves to read my manuscripts. I just have not taken the time to pursue it cause I am overwhelmed with nursing school right now... But I promised myself I will not sweep my talent under the rug!Good Luck!!
MsPleasure | Nov 23, 2007
how do u like my story?
Nov 22, 2007 by intelligent girl | Posted in Books & Authors
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